i'll echo a comment made previosuly...i love that this is an erotic piece but i can read it without cringing thru vulgarity. you took me there without forcing it, made it about mental stimulation and i like that. wait scratch that, LOVE that. :) great write sir
"Kiss your collarbone
Call your ear lobe home
Whisper: you're not in this alone
Let my hands hold your hips
Bite your bottom lip
Gently
Press and pull you
Next to me
Shhhh....
Don't speak ".. LOVED that part.. i wont say much else about this.. lol.. but i had to come back for a comment
even though this was erotic, what I appreciate about it is that it had a very sensual vibe to it as oppose to many erotic writes that tend to get very explicit and vulgar and forget to finesse the words. very nice C.