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"what do you do?"
  by psychopathiclover
  - This Poem is a response to the poem My Artificial Reality by terrenababii


what do you do when your with some one but love ur ex?
what do you do when you want to be with the guy your with but can't get over your baby's father?
what do you do when you feel you are loosing them both?
what do you do when you have so much pain that you just wanna kill yourself?
what do you do when you feel no one cares about you but your sister?
what do you do when you and your loved one seem to be miles apart?
what do you do when you feel there is nothing to live for?
what do you do when making yourself bleed is the only way you feel confort?
what do you do when your pregnant with a psycho mans baby and are afraid the child will be a demon?
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2007 (09:43 AM)
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  Will charles
08/23/07 (12:30 PM) 
Very good, once again I luv the repetition of question. i think you've mastered that. 10 starz

  GHOST718
08/21/07 (12:18 AM) 
DAMN THIS IS REALLY DEEP AND I REALLY LOVE IT AND ITS SAD AT THE SAME TIME BUT TO ANSWER UR QUESTION THE ONLY THING U CAN DO IS PUT IT IN THE LORDS HANDS AND LET HIM TAKE CARE OF IT

  Jdawg
08/20/07 (07:38 PM) 
its good ma, sumtimes determining your problems on paper helps with the discomforting pain.

  williesidney
08/20/07 (05:41 PM) 
Short but too the point 10 stars.

  The Dark Princ...
08/20/07 (04:02 PM) 
Very unique I enjoyed it very much.

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