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"What do you mean I ruined your peanut butter?"
  by drybaggij
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I fell in love with a song today by drybaggij


when two spirits collide so much passion
and in the resulting imperfection
amidst tangled appendages
and contorted heart strings
a heart sings
thinking frivolous flings
brings
many a wondrous thing
saying the darndest of things
{insert some dirty words in a few months}
so much for thinking I thinks
and no way to mend this ish
as misguided as so much misdirection
no cease to a scorned parties tongue lashing

Sorry, Blame It On Me - Akon

Nothing takes the taste out of peanut butter quite like unrequited love.
Charles M. Schulz

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Date Submitted: Dec 24, 2008 (07:46 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 01/03/09 (01:03 PM)
Author: drybaggij
Poem Title: Here I come

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  TheUltimateCur...
08/08/09 (12:32 PM) 
heavly insightful!

  Jenesis
03/01/09 (09:01 PM) 
wow that is deff true right here...i like the concept behind this...i also like your style with this shit to...keep the pen flowing man 10 starz for this stuff right here

  BlessedOne
01/28/09 (08:24 AM) 
Very catchy title and your words were very expressive. A whirl romance bites the dusk.

  Budderflibecks
01/26/09 (08:27 PM) 
I love the word usage in this...so much for thinking I thinks...that is what gets me all of the time...you colored this masterfully....

  --->QUEENPIN O...
12/29/08 (10:16 AM) 
AH...THE POEM TITLE ALL COMES TOGETHER WIT THE QUOTE....DAMN THIS WAS REALLY SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT...CRAZY HOW SHIT IS ALWAYS SWEET AT FIRST...

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