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"WHAT HURTS?"
  by P.Y.T


PAIN HURTS, BUT PAIN IS LOVE
IS IT THE FEELING OF KNOWING UR PLAYING WITH YOUR OWN HEAD,
JUS TO MAKE YOURSELF FEEL BETTER
(AND TRUTH IS HE'S NEVER COMING HOME AND U KNO IT)

IS IT THE FEELING OF THE PAST
ALL YOU'VE BEEN THROUGH WITHOUT HIM
OR THE THOUGHT OF WONDERING WHAT COULD'VE BEEN PREVENTED.
IF HE WAS THERE
(LEAVING THAT THOUGHT ALONE 4 A MINUTE DOESN'T HURT.


THE THOUGHT OF WHERE U LEFT YOUR FAMILY
(ESPESCIALLY THE MOM AND FEW)
THE THOUGHT OF DEATH
THE ABUSE HE USE TO TAKE
THE WAY HE WENT DOWN
A CUT WHEN U BLEED
MOM WORKING HARD 4 US. LOOKING SAD

WHAT HURTS?
THE THOUGHT OF THE PAIN TAKEN TO GIVE BIRTH TO ME
THE THOUGHT OF JESUS BEING CRUSIFIED
THE THOUGHT OF THE NEW GENERATION BANGIN
BLACK ON BLACK CRIME


WHAT HURTS? THESE FEELINGS
AND THOUGHTS OF MINE
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Date Submitted: Oct 17, 2008 (12:38 AM)
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  big josh
02/25/09 (12:33 PM) 
dis was truly from da heart shorty

  stricklyfromth...
12/16/08 (03:18 AM) 
speechless................. you hit home on this one hun... these thoughts do hurt and your words bring this hurt to the fore front....

  Present GEMiNi
11/20/08 (05:58 PM) 
im feelin dis write its resl deep n 2 da point half da statement brought up on yur write is affectin ppl day after day

  Breyonna
10/23/08 (12:05 AM) 
damn that was deep.....you did yo thang, and what you had to say you said it well

  BLACK STORM
10/22/08 (02:36 PM) 
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW........THIZ IZ THE TRUTH MA-MA......THIZ IZ DEEP....I GOTTA PUT THIZ ON MY FAV...I REALLY LIKE HOW U SPIT THIZ OUT..REAL TALK.....IMA BOUT 2 PEEP OUT UR OTHER WORK RITE NOW.

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