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"What If..."
  by Mr. DID


What if your man said I love you and was lying

What if he took you out to dinner and you end up buying

Is your love really swell or is it going down the drain

Tell me the truth,

Is your relationship a lose or is it a gain

What if you was in labor and your man never showed up

What if your man never tried to comfort you when you were shaken up

Is this someone that you would like to spend your life with

Wouldn't this be someone that would burn your heart into a crisp

What it you need money and your man never gave

What if your man didnt follow directions for your life to be saved

Truly do you want this man

Or is this man that would drown on the driest of land

What if for a change you wanted to go out on a date

And for that date he just happen to be late

Trust me and listen to that voice

Is this man really your choice

What if your man promise to love you til

Then what if your man just up and left

Would you follow him where ever he went

Would you write him a love letter that you wanted to be sent

What if this was your man

Tell me what would you do if this happened to you

Is this your man

Is this him all the way

Being honest what can you say

I'll tell you one thing you really dont need him

Take it from me

The love you have for each will be very grim

Dont you think that is time for a shift

Because you dont need to be with a man thinking "What if..."
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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2007 (08:38 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 04/07/08 (10:32 PM)
Author: tony da tigger
Poem Title: whut if

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comment icon  COMMENTS (54)
  Variator
11/10/09 (04:04 PM) 
nice nice nice! great way to present the question- bet that would make a girl really think deep about what path to choose

  lanaboo21
10/31/08 (09:35 AM) 
this is really good sweetie wow i reallly like it

  Yasin
07/10/08 (09:01 PM) 
really good write...deep 2..10 starz

  move
04/07/08 (11:06 PM) 
nice twist. you have the power to change things with your words... always use that power for good. very positive work within an uncomfortable subject.

  tony da tigger
04/07/08 (09:51 PM) 
yo ten froom me imma respon off dis this shit hot kept my attetion the whole way threw

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