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"What If"
  by J Baby


What if the vision I had wasn't really of you
What if the lies you told me were actually true
What if the mark you left on my heart was just an accident
Well if that were true I would have to say sorry for your car dent
What if I dreamed of you would that be crazy
What if I called you and answered with a hello baby
What if that ring on your finger really meant something
What if to you I was your one and only, the one you'd keep loving
What if the tears from my eyes were fake
What if a kiss from you could take the pain away
What if this life we have isn't a dream
What if I was older and not getting ready to turn 13
What if you could loe me for the person I could be
What if you made me strong instead of making me weak
What if the fact of the matter was
That you as a person could show no love
What if I quit and ended it now
Would you pain, be hurt, or feel shot down
What if this was the last thing I said to you
What if I said I don't love you, too
Now I got to end my what if's and maybe's
Maybe when you truely love me you can call me baby.
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Date Submitted: May 07, 2007 (08:03 PM)
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  crazydaisy92
06/19/07 (04:05 PM) 
this is great...very great write...i've been feelin like this lately.. it was very realtable and i could really feel the emotion you were trying to portray!

  I Am
06/01/07 (01:19 PM) 
Yo I like this poem, and you 13! ... Keep it up your a great writer

  Brokenvegtable
05/31/07 (10:37 AM) 
great write hon you really know how to express yourself i just with all your writting could have the same fire in them but i feel there are some the speak louder then others and those really make me feel i think i may just reponde to one in poem form soo if this keeps up

  Sigmatic
05/30/07 (07:02 PM) 
good shit. for someone who 13 you went through alot. i was diggin the flow and the concept. damn good write. Overall ten stars. good shit. keep it up

  TJ, the one an...
05/30/07 (06:38 PM) 
man i loved that 1. it sounds just like some stuff i went threw yestaday

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