Poem: what is happening?... - by deja`vu

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"what is happening?..."
by deja`vu

happiness
sadness
joy
sorrow
hope
loss
justice
war
love
hate
trust
unworthiness

these are the words and emotions that I feel too often!
what is this world coming to?....what is MY LIFE coming to?
the end, or the beginning..........
who knowz...who cares...who is there to hear my cry....
im just a quieted voice outta of thousands of screeching tongues.

Date Submitted: Mar 30, 2008 (01:14 AM)

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COMMENTS (15)

Flowet

09/17/09 (07:16 PM)

wow this was a very short blade with an infliction deeper than expected good write, there's always someone who will hear your voice not neccisarily addressing that to you but sure enough you are among those screeching voices or at least from the sounds of your poem without voice indeed your screams are heard

koolaid

06/16/08 (03:57 PM)

short but deep so much emmtion i loved it ma

Sum-Thyng Like...

04/21/08 (06:04 PM)

y got me i like this one thanx for asking me to read your work kep pen in hand and bleed ink in the paper u can only go up from here great write loved it easy 10

STREET

04/21/08 (05:58 PM)

kinda short but very deep good write 10+

ghetto romeo

04/21/08 (04:34 PM)

good stuff b like how u realy but ur emtions out there