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"What Is It That We've Become"
  by leezymleezy


There was a time when we were one
So what is it that we've become
My love for you is drenched in rain
Heart is bound and filled with pain

When I saw you walk away
I never found the words to say
How
I feel as empty as a home
Atop a hill and all alone

Vision cloudy, fog arrives
I have died a thousand times
Stitches and staples are dear to me
When broken down
It's hard to sleep

Spread across the barren sky
Stars won't show their glow tonight
If I could I'd change my hue
If only just to join them too
Venture the jungle through and through
To find my way back to you

Stressed again
My body numb
What is it that we've become
Emotions smoking like a gun

What is it that we've become


the hill house Pictures, Images and Photos


*I haven't posted in a while, and if you know me then you know that depressive writes are my fav*
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Date Submitted: Aug 12, 2009 (12:21 AM)
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  Dimplez
11/03/09 (10:39 PM) 
Dayum! Such a powerfully emotional piece! kinda a tear jerker 4 me, everyone knows i'm over emotional tho ROFL but yeah, def a fav!

  LibraDonDiva
08/24/09 (02:07 PM) 
I love the whole idea of this poem...very deep and the words they seem as though they juss flowed from your heart...very deep very true very sincer. I like it alot Kudos

  Chocolate City
08/12/09 (01:37 AM) 
im feelin this one right here bro. "Venture the jungle through and through, To find my way back to you" them words right there shows alot of sincerity. just tha poem itself was heartfelt.. and cumin form a guy.. makes it even more like geesh.. guys have emotions too.. nice way to express em.. nice write

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