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"What Would You Do"
  by ThaVirgo


If I told you that you are my first thought in the morning and my last thought at night
Would that show how much I think about you
If I smacked every person that looked at you wrong
Would that show how highly I think of you
If I had my own place, car and degree
Would that show how mature I am
If I cooked, cleaned, and could speak fluent Spanish
Would that show how capable I am
If I can make you laugh when you are feeling bad
Would that make you not think of anyone else
If I can make you cry out in pleasure, roll eyes back and curl your toes
Would that make you not want anyone else
If I called you every morning
Would that show how much I care about you
If I called you every night
Would that show how much I worry about you
If I wrote poem and every word was about you
Would that show that you inspire me
If I drew a picture of you that looked like it was touched by the hand of God
Would that show that you mesmerize me
I can do and be all of these things for you
But what would any of it prove
You already know that I love everything about you and would do anything for you
The real question is what would you do
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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2007 (01:42 PM)
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  Scriptixz
10/07/07 (05:52 AM) 
*sighs* indeed, such a question you pose...i enjoyed how you broke down every sentiment with an idea...with a notion of kinship..."If I drew a picture of you that looked like it was touched by the hand of God/Would that show that you mesmerize me" :-) so beautiful...the depths to which you love this person...i would sooooooooooo love to see someone respond to this! :-)

  williesidney
10/03/07 (06:29 PM) 
Now you had me goimg on this one too, you are teal good liked reading your work just keep on writting ten stars.

  iLL-BiLL
10/01/07 (03:28 PM) 
i like this alot, dahm wat choice would they have, be a fool not get w/ you, very good

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