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"What yOu fall in lOve fOr ; response"
  by PoeticCONViCT
  - This Poem is a response to the poem what i fall in love 4 by juju


What you fall in love for is that the question you ask?
well let` s start off by sayin ain` t no other got this 80` s ass.
I knOw i dOnt shOw yOu my lOve but yOu qOtta understand
it ain`t that easy.
yOu say i`m playinq yOu but it aint even like that.
yOur the Only niqka that can FULLY please me!!

i Know it seem` s like i just want the qucci in prada.
but trust me bby boy.
If i didnt have it i`ll be fine.. if i couldnt have you then i dont want nada.!

I know i been pissinq yOu off lately .
but ya girl been stressing on a daily.
i ain`t tryna put my weiqht on your` s shoulda
tho you say that` s what yOu here fuh.
But just trust me when i say.yOur lOve fuh
me ain`t in vain...
So ask me again ...
what you fall in love for?
Cause i`m the only real chick who is willinq to be
100% your` s and have ya last namee
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Date Submitted: Jun 21, 2007 (11:57 PM)
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  williesidney
06/30/09 (03:24 PM) 
Agian another nice written write just keep on using that skill you have and a gift too write poetry a big ten stars.

  Iaintgot1
07/09/07 (09:24 AM) 
I love it. I feel you to.

  MizzBrandon
07/03/07 (12:21 PM) 
I love the rhythm of this, sounds like it could be a song. Nice that you shed some light on the reasons why you may have been mistreating the object of your affection. Nice write.

  juju
06/22/07 (11:00 AM) 
aww this is so sweet great write keep it up

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