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"What You See In Me..."
  by Wrighter


When my world went crashing down,
You were there to soften the blow
And help me rise to my feet,
When I wanted to give into defeat,
You were there to caution my steps
And guide my way
I asked myself what you saw in me…

I want to say you saw,
This young mind that just needed time
To see its full potential
But I really don’t know what you saw in me

Nevertheless you took me under,
Kept a watchful eye
And trained me as we went along,
Yes I’ve done things wrong,
Made you disappointed and mad
Maybe even sad-
But you simply express and decompressed

Although things may be hard at times,
I remember that you are wise
And know what’s best
I hope that I’ve made you proud,
Allowing you to see how you molded me
I take pride in all of the belief you have
For a young mind who has yet to reach its full potential

So forgive me if I crumble and scatter
If I stumble and shatter
I will remain humble and smile
Because you took the time,
To see me between the lines of my poetry
And to see past a burning desire to achieve at something higher-
I may not know what you see in me…
But I hope you see in me,
A part of you, the person I aspire
To be like when I am no longer learning
But fully taught and able to help another

To Ms. Erin- my role model.
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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2009 (08:07 PM)
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  big josh
09/30/09 (09:23 AM) 
this was a great dedication man. nice work

  bryannanevaeh
09/08/09 (11:55 PM) 
i really like this poem...u kno no one is ever too old to learn but its great when others are able to help young minds grow and learn...there is so much negative in the world..im so glad u found possitive in ur role model....great write mamaz

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