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"WHAT'S LEFT?...(AREA 25 DICTION CHALLENGE)"
  by Untouched_Soul


Macrology is an epidemic that now curses the world
Leaving us septic from its uncaring bacteria
Like a relapsing fever...getting hotter and hotter
Its symptoms begin with you leaking filth from your mouth
Leaving your putrid thoughts to fester
Contaminating everyone with these nonchalant
Schizophrenic mentalities
Now people walk back and stare at the homeless man
But not lend a hand
They only become concerned
When the drug dealer is selling on their corner
But once he relocates
They go back to allowing their kids to come home late
Why?
Because they are too selfish
Promising to commit only so that their wish
Can come true...look at you
The reason for cagamosis
Sitting back and watching families fall apart
A preacher blessing unions
That he knows will fail
Just because he wants to full the collection pail
So he can live in a mansion
While within a year your house is in shambles
Not even a foundation left
Like a tornado swept in on hatred’s wings
And destroyed the love you thought was there
Leaving behind children soaked in farrago
Wondering where do they go
From here
Ends up living life confused wrapped in false pretences
Becoming the next dacnomania victim
Factitive of the murder rate
A scary fate, for someone like me
That has grown up to believe in fantasy
Watching your life culuminate happily ever after
Slashing literacy
Cursing the value of education
For it is worthless to someone who won’t use it
Humanity is destroying itself
Easily contributing to morality’s defenestration
By opening up their doors
To single parent, abusive and drug abused homes
A mother laying her child in bed with his father’s sin
Just so she can get a taste of cocaine’s ecstasy
Handing down this ritual from generation to generation
So that her great grandchild wishes for abacination
As the next best thing is to become a serial killer
And punish others for his discomfort
While his mother and father
Blame the government or the teacher
I say they should be lined up
Subjected to baculine
Till they feel the humiliation of their neglect
Because if we wait for a cure
We may find ourselves facing extinction
Wondering if
Mankind is a paragram



UNTOUCHEDSOUL2009

Abacinate--to blind by putting red-hot copper basin near the eyes
Baculine--of, like or pertaining to the stick or cane; of like or pertaining to flogging
Cagamosis--unhappy marriage
Calumniate--to slander, misrepresent; besmirch
Dacnomania--obsession with killing
Defenestration--throwing a person or object out a window
Factitive--signifying making or causing something to be
Farrago--confused mass of objects or people; disordered mixture
Macrology--much talk with little to say; redundancy; pleonasm
Paragram--play on words in which letters are changed
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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2009 (08:01 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 08/13/09 (11:48 PM)
Author: stranger
Poem Title: The way out of life

Date: 08/13/09 (08:09 PM)
Author: Group: AREA 25
Poem Title: WHAT'S LEFT.... DICT...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Athena317
08/18/09 (01:30 PM) 
girl... thanks for the definitions LOLOLOL your commentary and observations were so on point! beautiful mind!

  Asu
08/16/09 (05:35 PM) 
Utterly caveman speechless. Superbly delivered! 10x10x10x10x10x10x10x10 starz.

  Planted Daisie...
08/14/09 (10:59 AM) 
Mami you did an awesome job on this scribe....did the diction challenge so much justice and the message was loud and clear. nicely penned

  stranger
08/13/09 (11:45 PM) 
Yay, very true ... mankind is actually a paradox, because we all want to love and be loved but few do so , our mind evolved to be able to lie even to ourselevs , and now the lies have taken over and run our world to it's end ... so inexorable that poets wrote about the inevitability thousands of years ago ... no chance of turning it around now... the NWO willbe the biggest disaster mankind ever agreed to, basically an evil world dictator pretending to be our benefactor like most politicians of t...
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  MAVRICK
08/13/09 (10:29 PM) 
You've just delivered a message that reaches deep down in the soul and screams so loud it could shake the world...WOW...You took this diction challenge and made it a Declaration of Human Mismanagement...BRILLIANT SCRIBE, SUPERB MESSAGE AND A FAV!

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