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"When I Open My Eyes"
  by 3rd_Coast


I can see that you're my girl,
Your beauty shines so bright,
I can see that you're my world,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see you'll always care,
You don't even have to lie,
I can see you're always there,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see that your my friend,
And that your willing to be until I die,
I can see the love that you send,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see your shield of protection,
At times I throw external fights,
I can see that you're truly a blessing,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see our love strengthen its meaning,
Every second that passes us by,
I can see the strong sensation it's bringing,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see that if we both help each other,
Things can and will turn out right,
I can see that you'll remain my lover,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see your soul as it lifts up,
To spread its imaginary wings and fly,
I can see you succeed if you don't give up,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see us unite back together,
If we'll listen and follow this guide,
I can see myself earn you as a treasure,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see and I do believe,
That if I hold my hopes up high,
I can see the road that's best for me,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see that I can succeed,
All I've got to do is try,
I can see this is the life I lead,
Whenever I open my eyes.
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Date Submitted: Jun 15, 2009 (12:09 AM)
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  lyrically Bles...
06/18/09 (01:30 AM) 
Beautiful written

  Amayzn
06/18/09 (12:49 AM) 
Tht's wonderful homie.... enjoyed reading this here...

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