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"When it counts"
  by Ki-sla


Don’t tell me you love me
That’s just words
Prove that you love me
Try something I haven’t heard
You can’t prove it with sex
That’s just a reaction of your erection
I can get that anywhere
As long as I have protection
You can’t prove it with money dummy
An independent woman doesn’t need your funding
Prove it with time and dedication
In the stress and strain of life’s expectations
When I’m hurting and I don’t have that smile that drew you to me
Will you still do me and woo me
Show me my outward appearance doesn’t prove who is me
Be my friend through thick and thin
Loves an outward expression of a feeling within
When you feel it in your soul
Expressing it comes naturally
In fact your weak
By the emotional defeat
Of your heart skipping beats
Without me your incomplete
When it gets this deep
Proving your love is easy
No direction needed
You need no help to please me
Don’t just tell me you love me
And expect me to believe
I’m completely done with wearing my heart on my sleeve
Show me you mean it
Or like the rest
You can bounce
Be there and we’ll share
True love
When it counts……..








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Date Submitted: Oct 11, 2009 (06:48 PM)
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  sexy.beautiful...
10/18/09 (04:23 PM) 
this poem was emotional and straight to the point, I liked when u said an independent woman doesn\'t need your funding prove it time and dedication....so true

  leethal
10/11/09 (07:17 PM) 
nice scribe ki_sla! i am glad to see you are still writing! keep that ink flowin

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