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"When you died."
  by prettysugar10


When you died I …
Cried
Flooded the Southside
Wit
Currents and currents of
Untamed tides
Of misery.

When you died I…
Why’d God
Bona fide war bride
Bright side fried
Erased the “word” Pride
Longing for you by my side

When you died I...
Supplied myself with hydro+ heroine
From da west side
Tripping like Jekyll and Hyde
Over supplied
Thinking about suicide
Since you died...

"3 hours later"

she speaks out slowly....
ok ok ok ok ok ... baby im coming
everything is spinning and slowing down.................moments later

I overdosed off the thought of living without you…



… …(Rip ,new bride “Banae” & uncle Russ) soul mates reunited …1983 & 1984…


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Date Submitted: Apr 08, 2008 (12:30 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 05/18/08 (02:56 AM)
Author: H.H. Holloway
Poem Title: The Night That I Died

Date: 04/08/08 (02:36 PM)
Author: tony da tigger
Poem Title: when u died

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comment icon  COMMENTS (31)
  Tr'ce
06/30/09 (10:06 AM) 
Thats waz up Boss......Like

  Holly132
04/24/09 (01:52 PM) 
i like this was real goooood! full of emotion! rockin loved it... keep it up?

  big josh
04/22/09 (01:06 AM) 
ay this was a real sweet write, I kno yu put yur heart in this one, nice :)

  Missez Tropica...
04/02/09 (11:23 AM) 
I really feel this. It is deep and many people can't relate to what you are saying. I know i'm young but i can really undestand what you are truly really meaning and what u are tryin to say

  mmd2888
01/25/09 (08:09 PM) 
This is very deep.. I can dig it tho

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