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"When You Love Someone"
  by Number 1


When you love someone so deep inside,
it seems like its so easy to hide
You've loved him for so very long,
you think he could do no wrong

Everyday you would hope and pray,
that he would always stay this way
He treated you like you should be treated,
you thought your life was finally completed

You thought your love was growing true,
and then one day it was all so blue
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt

He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
all you wanted to do was curl up and die
You thought your relationship would never end,
but it was all so fake and pretend

One night he was so sweet to you,
you thought all those things were maybe untrue
Two days later he was back the same,
you thought you were the one to blame

He thought the relationship was getting a little too serious,
and he had become a little too curious
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past

You thought you would marry him some day,
by this time God wanted to have his way
You wanted things back how they were before,
but you knew that couldn't happen anymore

It was a Saturday night about 10 o'clock,
you heard the news and it wasn't a shock
You knew this was going to happen soon,
as you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.
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Date Submitted: May 30, 2007 (03:45 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  KINGLO
05/23/08 (01:03 PM) 
TH!Z !S HOT

  Sauve
09/10/07 (11:29 PM) 
i know exactly how you feel...i like this poem...keep up the good work girl!!!!

  MissJaiReid
09/06/07 (08:36 PM) 
I really like this one...it could have so many different meanings....

  space99jam3
09/06/07 (08:25 PM) 
i like dat 1 girl u go girl

  African
05/30/07 (07:28 PM) 
dis is very sad, but keep y9our head up one day u gonna find yur true love

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