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"when youre gone"
  by koolaiid


when youre gone who will i lean on
who will i be
whose gonna blow up my phone jus to hear my voice
whose gone put a smile on my face
who will i have to think of
whose gonna care bout me
will the roses still be red and will the sky still be blue
will everything be the same
who am i gone talk about
who am i gone dream about
whose gone tell me that im beautiful
who am i gone kick it wit
whose the next person that imma fall in love wit
whose gonna cheer me up when im feelin down
who am i gonna talk to when im mad
will you miss me
will i still be the gurl you promised to always love
will you still LOVE me
will i always be yo baby
who am i gonna keep breakin up wit and gettin bak wit
when will i see you again
imma miss seein yo face
imma miss you bein there
imma miss havin you here at my house
imma miss jus knowin that youre MINE
imma miss how you use to make me laugh
imma miss everything we been thru
imma cherish our SPECIAL MOMENTS
i dont think i will be able to go on
when youre gone i dont want you to FORGET me but instead REMEMBER me.
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2007 (02:25 AM)
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  brwnsknpopn
12/23/08 (02:57 PM) 
This is something that every girl thinks... Nice write..

  DreamGurl
11/16/08 (01:56 AM) 
i wonder like this all the time i love to see poems like this just letting your feelings and thoughs in your mind flow love it much love

  jerl
11/08/08 (11:47 PM) 
I guess we all grow. I hope your growing is done in grace. Then you will see that you should put your trust in JESUS, not in man. HE said to put your trust and faith in HIM and all you need will be added. Keep thinking, you make others think too.

  ~Yung Msz~
09/16/08 (09:37 AM) 
Hey mama thnx for the comment a min back..bt hey..listen Im so feelN this, N like you on this onE i TOO feel like this..N thn U about the Tylenol..Bt this is so deep N it hits apart in my heart so strong...cause with him I do wonder! So thnx for wirting this n please never give up ur beautiful talent..to xPRESS

  NanceNance
08/20/08 (01:31 PM) 
damn gurl..you know how to think good. great job.. keep going..

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