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"Where does that leave us...?"
  by Planted Daisies


Where does that leave us…?


WE were always ONE
Did everything together
Struggled through turbulent weather
Made it worth the while
Made it worth to come home at night
And from one day to the next
You took my dreams and shattered them away
You took a detour somewhere
And left me here alone
One path now split in two
Now I live with this burden
Of knowing your love is no longer there
Of knowing you no longer lay at my side at night
That your warmth will never be there

So…
Where does that leave us?
Where does that leave me?
If you are no longer here with me
Where does that leave you?

When you promised me
You would always be there
That you would be with me
Til the end of time

Leaving me in tears
Surrounded by fears
In a empty home
Here all alone

Why find another?
Why find love elsewhere
When I am here

Will friendship ever come our way?
If I can’t have you to love me today…

Where does that leave me?
Where does that leave you?
Where does that leave us?

When I miss you so much
Now that emptiness roams my home
Can we ever patch up our ends?
So we can live again

Where does that leave us?
Planted Daisies2009
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Date Submitted: Nov 02, 2009 (09:28 AM)
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  Psychosis Aka ...
11/07/09 (11:07 PM) 
this was great poem that i enjoyed very much

  AR-15
11/04/09 (09:42 AM) 
a deep emotional piece indeed.. captures the intense thoughts of your mind combined with the pure expression of your heart... Great piece

  African Queen
11/03/09 (04:53 AM) 
so emotional...seek deep inside and I am sure you will have an answer to all your questions....but always remember that is they don't seem to care then they are definitely not worth it....nice work!!

  Cornfed
11/02/09 (08:03 PM) 
A story of place! A moment in time! Emotions and passion shared than lost! You creat the image that grabs the reader and shakes them hard as life goes on! great ink!

  ButterflyDream
11/02/09 (11:14 AM) 
a heart wrenching write full of raw emotion.nicely done:)

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