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"where im at is not where i should be"
  by kc429


love the way he looks at me and the dimple that shows wit a smile
his accent an way he talks
the attitude and confidence in his walk
he knows who and what he want in life
never argues evan if he is right
willing take chances and make moves
feel like an addict and he is my drug
i cant keep running from his love
knowing he is where i should be
instead of waking up to this man i see

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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2009 (01:59 AM)
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  Tru_Floerty
09/06/09 (08:48 PM) 
omg this is it.. u jus explained wat at least half a town of females are feeling... i loved it

  tyniee79
08/26/09 (07:57 PM) 
So much love, feeling and emotion in this. Some may say these terms are the same but they are not. Short but easy to enjoy as I'm sure many fall into a relationship that is somewhat perfect, but they push love away. And thank you for not using TYPING slang!!!!

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