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"where we stand"
  by after vision


we -- together
lets look deeper
do we have love
is this one a keeper

i want love
but have yet to find anything but hurt
often promised happiness
but delivered things that don't work

i am in the mood for love
but you have yet to earn it
would love to teach you --- time
but i have yet to learn it

my body says to toy
with the physical
but my spirit knows that if i do
that there is a heart to kill

your heat simmers that line
that controls -- stop and go
your -- new to me
is the path once choosen before

we stand -- together divided
because or goals are unexplained
i want you
but fear you don't want me the same


after vision

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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2008 (08:45 AM)
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  .Always.Catali...
10/05/08 (01:18 PM) 
the risk we run when falling in love...at least you stop to think instead of just acting on what makes you feel good...

  WIZ
10/03/08 (08:37 AM) 
POWERFUL RITE! IS THE PATH ONCE CHOSEN BEFORE? THAT LEAVES ALOT TO THINK ABOUT AND MAYBE JUST MAYBE YOU JUST NEVER KNOW! NICE SCRIBE!

  blacknsexyjuic...
10/01/08 (08:40 PM) 
wow,very deep and well spoken everyone needs love this is such an awesome piece and in due time love you will surely find there will be no need to explain she will love you just the same keep on writing

  Syndel
10/01/08 (05:06 PM) 
very deep an powerful words some that just cant be explained but sometimes just some times its worth the smile

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