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"while you were sleeping"
  by BrEeZyWrOtE
  - This Poem is a response to the poem while u were sleeping by wwiseone2


*
*
while you were sleeping
i felt your soul
touching me in the midst of
your delta waves luring you further and further from conciousness
*
*
while you were sleeping
i feel in love with your mind
because i realized that having just your body with me
didn't amount to as much as
when we talk
and
when we share our deepest intellecual thoughts
*
*
while you were sleeping
i healed your body
with the cleansing tears
that drenched your chest
tears of fear that
at any moment
i could lose you
with you right there
*
*
while you were sleeping
i prayed that when you woke up
it would be me still there
holding you hands
tears hiding behind my eyes
as i whisper in your ear
"guess what happened while you were sleeping"
*
*
while you were sleeping
i fell for a man in such a way others couldn't fathom
i fell in love everyday i watched your peaceful face rest
earnestly waiting for those beautiful eyes to smile at me again
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Date Submitted: May 13, 2009 (05:56 PM)
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  YoungJukeHead
11/13/09 (11:58 PM) 
this shit is dope, fly, great, perfect. Only "GOOD" woman can speak like this...

  King Sa'Ra
11/03/09 (12:23 PM) 
Great write I'm feeling this joint 4real, 10Starz. Check out my writez.

  Chinazy
11/01/09 (09:36 PM) 
Beautiful write!!

  leethal
10/18/09 (07:56 PM) 
very nice scribe breezy! as always, your words just effortlessly flow down the page!

  KingArt
10/08/09 (11:36 PM) 
A really nice write. One that I'm sure every man would love to receive from the love of his life. I'm truly a fan of the last stanza.

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