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"Whipping of the Vines"
  by pepsi_colachik08




For every moment,
every beat,
I dream of the day
of true love.
How every muscle in my body
clinches, when I see your face.
The only sound I hear is the whipping of the vines,
but what I imagine them to be is the sweat embrace of your arms around my body.
your arms are holding me,
caressing me,
and making sure I am safe,
from all the whipping of the vines
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Date Submitted: Jun 11, 2007 (09:29 AM)
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  juicy01
06/14/07 (12:34 AM) 
short and sweet ,i liked it ..good job

  sweet _skittle...
06/12/07 (10:07 PM) 
nice poem....keep doin yo thang

  Mz. Lovable
06/11/07 (07:56 PM) 
really sweet poem ma!!!

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