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"White Lies"
  by Dimplez


Your eyes - bright as a winter morning\'s glow
hold lies that will forever be...unknown,
to each new lover, your deceit\'s unshown,
but through the years, white lies began to grow
into - full fledged falsehoods. Before you know
it, they\'ve consumed each truth that tries to flow,
through parted lips. Past them, they shall not go.
For your mind is programmed to tell a lie,
and gritted teeth won\'t let the truth go by.
The only resolution is to cry,
and hope someone sees the truth in each eye.

*a poem a wrote for my poetry class*
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Date Submitted: Oct 25, 2009 (02:30 AM)
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  da black princ...
10/29/09 (12:27 AM) 
I'm impressed,but how about hte instructor. great job.

  ButterflyDream
10/26/09 (11:58 AM) 
loved the beginning.you really pulled the reader in with that winter morning comparison,that one line set the complete tone and bettered help me feel the impact of your lover\'s white lies.I think you did a great job,what did ur instructor think?

  W_J_lyriC
10/25/09 (09:35 AM) 
I\'m feeling this. It was so emotional, and at the same time it had a soothing kinda flow. Nicely done, you should get an A for this.

  Tiku
10/25/09 (08:00 AM) 
emotionally charged.The flow is sweet and natural.nicely written.

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