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"Who am I?"
  by Young


I march out with madness

Some people are actors

Feel like they subscribed for disaster now they bout to receive they package

Take a look at me, humble from my feet up

My words clean my soul

So my poems are like Green Tea

I wonder will my future be great

Will I be known for something?

I wear my hat low cause my eyes seen so much pain

I look for the best in a person, even if that person points out my flaws

My heart pumps concrete with roses

They say I keep a mean face, I say I’m in deep thought

They try to figure me out

I tell them don’t try, cause I change by the day

They say I’m a beast with the poems

I say my emotions over flow so they must go somewhere

God gave me the gift to reach people with words

Didn’t really figure that out until I let someone read my art and they cried….

I love life

I am a reflection of my family

So I must shine……………..
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Date Submitted: Jul 10, 2009 (04:11 PM)
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  NeshaW1
10/06/09 (10:19 AM) 
I honestly enjoyed reading this...there's sumthn about this poem that stands out. Its like I can feel each and every word there. just like gifted pen said" its gentle but powerful"...and thats sooo true. love when u said "I WEAR MY HAT LOW CAUSE MY EYES SEEN SO MUCH PAIN" thats a mind blower right there. man and the heart with the concrete and the roses man u did ya thang on this. i can go on and on..but i know one thing...THIS IS A DEFINITE FAV...10STARZ BOO KEEP'EM COMIN.

  juicy01
07/25/09 (09:25 PM) 
i like this real hot and positive...keep it up poet

  foxi
07/20/09 (09:47 PM) 
this poem is beautiful i love it you also have a great gift from God... now this is a ten all the way

  iva
07/13/09 (05:58 PM) 
great poem

  Ms. I decided
07/12/09 (09:05 PM) 
good write!!!

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