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"who am i"
  by Group: GREENEYED BANDITS


Get into my psyche
Me who am I?
I\'m the leaves on the palm trees
so let the wind break u into the wide ruled
minds are dying out here
and wrinkled bullets keep shooting us down
so I wonder if we believe or we cry out of fear
I\'m just an echo looking for ear to caress
blindfold fronting opening the door to contagious
are u following swallow my phlegm?
I\'m trapped. Unaware, and woven in to steel cages
holding all that pain in my heart
who am I?
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Date Submitted: Oct 19, 2009 (05:10 AM)
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  stranger
10/19/09 (09:04 AM) 
Nice insights and elegant poetry... we can make up words of all kinds to try to hide what our hearts tells us, that this world is just wrong, for everyone, but we most go along with what we know is wrong cos\' no-one alone can change it save Jesus , and the very few who now follow his lead in the thin end of the wedge of a power process that re-assers the value of lovingness to mankind , in power after the terrible failure due our empty system of life, that just doesn\'t bring much happiness to ...
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  leethal
10/19/09 (07:12 AM) 
you are a greeneyed poetry bandit haha! nice drop rel. i\'m glad to see your job(s) are not stopping your pen hand from movin

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