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"Who Am I To You"
  by 22dcentpoet


I am a waterfall flowing quietly over stones and rocks
I am a cloud hanging like cotton candy in the sky
I am a star glowing brightly to guide you to safety
I am the sun warming your insides and making you smile
I am the one who carries you in my arms when danger is near
I am the cloak that covers your naked body
I am the one you call on in time of hurt and pain
I to am the one you curse when things don't work out
I am the one that sits on your shoulders and tells you right from wrong
I am the one that helps you raise a family and provide food for your table
You saw what I did with one fish, Imagine me with an EBT card
I am the past, future and present
I will never forsake you
I am .......................
GOD



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Date Submitted: Jan 05, 2008 (10:46 PM)
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  WIZ
09/06/08 (01:01 PM) 
BEAUTIFUL MASTERPIECE OF A RITE!! TRUTH INDEED! ROCK-ON!!

  D.K Lord of Da...
01/06/08 (06:41 AM) 
NOW DIS IS AMAZING I LIKE DA MESSAGE AND I LIKE DA WAY YOU PUT IT TOGETHER..DARE IS NUTTINK QUITE LIKE GOD AND YOU SENT DA MESSAGE OUT LOUD AND CLEAR.. NICE FLOW

  Syndel
01/06/08 (06:17 AM) 
Yes god is God good not some of the time but all the time and he doesnt know how to fail this write is a beautiful dedication and acknowledgement for the things he has done very calm and tranquil moment

  heaviness
01/06/08 (02:02 AM) 
can this take the place of my sunday morning church service today????? you preached poet you preached

  .Archaic.Bliss...
01/06/08 (01:19 AM) 
This was a very nice message to post up I love when poets write poems like these.. sometimes we need to be reminded of a greater purpose and greater goods... to take us away from the pain and hurt that we write of...

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