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"Who Said & How Come?"
  by Ciara


Who said love couldnt come back in style like skinny jeans
... and men couldnt have character like Martin Luther King and treat these women..like queens...
What "ignorant nigga" started the trend of disrespecting women,
when back then, men use to tip their hats to pretty women and holds doors for ladies
and wouldnt think twice about being shady to the mother of their kids.

How come when we speak of supporting our men, it cant be emotionally and spiritualy instead its financially.
He's the bread winner so y cant we stick to the script and just make dinner,
... clean the house, raise the kids, be a mentor
... support system, and make working an option?

How come I cant have a relationship with my man
like my mother has with my father?
How do men expect us to be so submissive when for years they've been dogs...
... if we're not the lost souls that allow these men to lay with us for free pussy, free meals, and a place to lay their head,
... then we know a fool who is.
But yet we talk about prostitutes when they "actually" make these niggas pay for it all... Pussy, Dinner, and A Room...
So whose foolish now?
Hmmm, I think thats pretty fuckin smart...
Shit a wise woman told me,
"Baby, u should never be broke, sittin on a gold mine" (think about it)

In about 10 years no one will be getting married
because we're sleeping with our sisters husbands but "Oh No!" we dont want that to happen to us.
And the men dont give a damn cause they dont believe in that bitch named "KaRmA"
... just as long as they have a woman to call a wife and the mother to their kids without him having to participate in something called parenting cause he likes to live like he's still singled.
What happen to the men teaching their sons to respect their mothers?
.... oh wait... the sons dont know their fathers so it becomes a p.a.t.t.e.r.n

Y couldnt I be born back when men were real men and ladies were fuckin ladies...
...women of all shapes and sizes were confiednt and respected themselves with the upmost respect
... and men were their protectors...
How come u cant be the King and me your queen?
... U be papa and Ill be mama?
... U be Mr and Im the Mrs?
... U be the Head and Ill be the neck? lol
Which goes back to my original question...

What "ignorant nigga" started the trend of disrespecting women,
... and what weak chick allowed it?
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Date Submitted: May 11, 2009 (09:16 PM)
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  Planted Daisie...
09/28/09 (06:25 AM) 
I hear you 100%....you speak sooo much truth in your writes....nice way of displaying emotions and life valuees

  Tr'ce
09/10/09 (05:04 PM) 
PREACH CIARA PREACH......I LOVE THIS WRITE...SO DOWN DIRTY AND REAL.....i LIKE THE FACT YOU TOOK TIME TO PUT DETAIAL INTO THE WRITING...PAINTING SUCH A FRICKEN BRIGHT PICTURE....WHAT DID HAPPEN TO THE REAL MEN.......10 AND THEN SOME

  T.J.STA
05/19/09 (04:09 PM) 
Favorite! Favorite! Favorite! You went to chuch on this one C..."CHUCHHH, TABERNACLE, SANCTUARY!!!" I am most definitely feeling this C!! Some 2 Trill shit you expressed in this poem, love it! But it does make you wonder, who started the trend of niggas disrespecting & cheating on they girls and who is the female that allowed this to happen to them....Yeah girl, I'm definitely co-signing this. 10000000 STARS!

  MzSpoon aka "T...
05/18/09 (09:29 PM) 
I am co-signing this 100% because we have allowed the roles to be switched and the men have forgotten their place.

  (Floetic~One) ...
05/18/09 (09:25 PM) 
wonderfully expressed sis... real talk! i enjoyed reading this piece. keep doin your thang. 10 starz

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