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"Why Cant You?"
  by mmd2888
  - This Poem is a response to the poem how do you by me-me


Why can’t you love someone without limitations?
Break down the walls, no room for hesitation

What cant you love someone with out limits?
No catch phrase, game or even corny gimmicks

Why cant you love someone with out conditions?
And have a love much better than we envisioned?

Why cant you love someone unconditionally?
Even when we cant get married traditionally?

Why cant you love some one whole heartedly?
So much til ur spirit becomes apart of me

Why cant you love someone with all you heart?
And honor the vows like til death do us part?

You love them for their flaws any many imperfections
Because I’m perfect for you lay down ur expectations

I know I may not have all that you require
But I’m grounded, have morals and I am no liar

Every time you talk I swear I listen
But Its like an angel speaking can u envision?

I never meant to hurt you intentionally
All I wanted was u to pay attention to me

Yes this was a rebound from the start
But the love it came straight from the heart

So now despite the things in our past
You askin me how do we make this love last?

I’m here still ready to stay true
So let me ask how do you?
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Date Submitted: Sep 11, 2009 (01:18 AM)
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  Ciara
09/13/09 (01:01 AM) 
People cant love whole-heartedly because they r scarred... but thats y we should take chances.. u never know what the end results will be;) i like this piece... 10strz

  AKYBSANE1
09/11/09 (08:40 PM) 
damn,.. that was a deep write, i lik i lik 10stars

  me-me
09/11/09 (01:29 PM) 
i cant stand you at this moment, im fukken crying why cant my girl feel this way why does a perfect stranger have to say the words i want her to say.....i love it i really do but damn im emotional as hell right now

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