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"+++Why Do You Hate Him?+++"
  by bRo0kLyN BaYbEe


He can't take it, Hes building hatred 'cause he despise this treatment
Your resentment is very blatant, yet you disguise it as secret
Confusion shows in your eyes, don't try to hide or keep it
Another divided family is a fate hes tryin to prevent
Disagreements arise and inside he cries to cease it
Yet outside he battles back like he want you to die bleedin
Not improving, instead they're losing straight abusing their time
Hes tired of lying to other people like Their doing just fine
He wants to stay faitful to God, start a family, and earn wealth
You rather act destructively and not preserve yourself
He watches you covet trifle things when you think you're in love
He warns you of great danger, you say Hes thinkin too much
Constantly they contradict, hes the day and you're night
So violent and crazy, only God can break up their fights
he thinsk he knows it all, "you think you're better than me"
Hes the conscience, you're the flesh..He guesses Yall never agree
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Date Submitted: Mar 26, 2009 (09:18 AM)
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  lazyme35
09/17/09 (02:26 AM) 
that was hot sweet loving the flow.beautifully written...10*s

  mizemotion
09/10/09 (09:42 PM) 
very great write....there are some of them ppl out there that are going through this and this was very inspirational to be reading....very in depth....loved it......10 starz

  Boowie
09/10/09 (04:16 PM) 
Great write.!! Im feeling this. Grabbed my attention quickly.

  Quiz
09/07/09 (09:43 PM) 
i lke this one. it was deep it shows you tryin to connect with the reader

  naxez
04/28/09 (08:40 PM) 
that was some nice lyrics! Keep it up,you good at this!

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