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"Why??"
  by Antranette_J


Why is my life filled with nothing but pain,
Why is there no hope or love for me to gain,
Why am I always the one to blame...

Why is my life a living hell,
Why does it feel like im trapped in a jail cell,
Why must I do nothing but fail,

Why cant any of my dreams grow,
Why am I the only one who doesnt know,
Why cant the real me show,

Why am I so into this,
Why cant it always be peaceful and bliss,
Why do I aim at the target and always miss,

Why do they fail to see,
Why wont my wish come to be...
Why cant I just be me??

Antranette_J
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Date Submitted: Jun 27, 2009 (09:57 PM)
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  G.A.
08/26/09 (05:13 PM) 
everyone comes to that point in life like why why why why why me its a reason for it for the better or for the worst. but what makes us stronger is how we learn n handle the problem that comes our way

  true poet
08/22/09 (02:08 AM) 
I FEEL WUT U SAYING OND IS 4 REAL SUM TIMES I FEEL DA SAME WAY..KEEP IT UP

  Jusane P. Croo...
08/21/09 (11:45 PM) 
feelin ya shit..like the similes an metaphors..dont be afraid to dig deeper..nobody's soul truly can ever truly be mesured..keep it up

  daidai_dts4l
08/19/09 (06:06 PM) 
damn ''why do i aim at the target and always miss'' damn. true words ma. i liked it

  TUANE
08/02/09 (02:54 PM) 
I can feeel you on this ehre ma. I wwas at tha point always askin why. Why does everything I do seem to fail. Why am I the one always goin through hell.Im finna throw a lil bible on ya: Always know and remember tha tha Race isnt given to tha strong and tha swift, but to tha one that endireth until tha end ma. No one has an easy life, no matter what they say. It will neva be alwyas peaceful and bliss. I can tell you that. When you are to a point like this, God is jus awaiting you to come to him i...
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