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"WHY HE STILL WRITES"
  by briscoe
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The unnoticed writer by Gina1982


[: walking unnoticeably,..... steps crackling as he walks;}


down......
........

the stairs
...........

his heart still black as night
no one respects his right (write)
to writefully(right)
get down his thoughts and paint a vivid scene;
but still.. he writes;


day and knight he puts up a fight;
to feel himself when (win) he
thinks he was a successful write


the urge that makes his soul yearn
as the combustion in him sounds off;
is what gets him up in the middle of the night;
to write down his rotten corspe on the innocent white
doves; he's not sastisfied until he sees his
blood;

running down like an unstoppable crimson flood;
like a vudo-doll he controls the mastery of his form;
locking himself in the abyss cube-like dorm;

his heart still black as night
no one respects his right (write)
to writefully(right)
get down his thoughts and paint a vivid scene;
but still.. he writes;


he still writes;

until the day he feels (fills)
himself........... a truely
successful write.



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Date Submitted: Sep 03, 2009 (05:51 PM)
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  --->QUEENPIN O...
11/13/09 (09:42 PM) 
his heart still black as night no one respects his right (write) to writefully(right) get down his thoughts and paint a vivid scene; but still.. he writes; <---i think almost poet can relate to this....very dope

  KiNg-Go0B3r
09/10/09 (07:06 PM) 
WOW straight up bruh, bravo, wonderful piece mayn, gotta fav from the pic to the ink and the way u think, its all nice

  คว...
09/04/09 (06:35 PM) 
i dont kno how i missed this response....i would have commented earlier....very nice play off of mine.....i like how the begining and end reiterate each other....its about that feeling deep inside....expressing something that is so hard to put into words...and then forcing that feeling upon your reader.....writing just to express....a way to stay sain......nice job

  Trill
09/04/09 (07:47 AM) 
Yeah i feel this one.I write like dat cuz im tryna chase whats da deepest feelings inside me.Good write patna.

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