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"Why?"
  by forever_broken


why are you doing this
what will it accomplish
is it even worth it
just let it be
stop trying to fix the actions of others
you are just setting yourself up to get hurt
dont you see
you will have to get to close
you will have to get in to deep
and when it comes down to it
you will be to far gone
i wont be able to save you this time
i wont be able to reach you
not where you end up
so please dont do this
i dont want to lose you
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Date Submitted: Jul 03, 2009 (05:52 PM)
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  Syndel
07/04/09 (05:47 PM) 
this feels like your talking to yourself in the third position which does help sometime I enjoyed this read

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