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"Why/Who Killed It"
  by *SaVaGe*


Who (Full) - Joe Budden

Is It R&B, I hear everyone screamin falsetto
Or is it to much rap violence, and everyone claimin they ghetto
Maybe it was 50 cent, even though I like the dude
And most rappers I enjoy, tryna fight the dude
Can't come up with your own shit, they just copy
Your number one, if you spit bull and its sloppy
They don't watch me They watch it
Everyone copin flows, And most of em nonsense
Can't feel you, if there's nothin to feel
And the good Rappers, are the ones with no deals

Maybe it was that crank shit, or even the hyphy
Each corner hating, take a second and Bite me
Most of the artist fake, forgot how to be real
Now a days niggas bowing to money, and forgot why we really kneel
Nah, it was Paul Wall with that ice shit
Or maybe even when dmx stop dropin that nice shit
They say it was Jay-z when he first retired
Maybe it all come back, when Shyne times expires
That seems kinda of long
Were already slippen, no signs of holdin on

Shit it was when eminem started to drift from the scene
Or when diss writes started to go mainstream?
Now a days People Yaapp Names on a track
For no reason, No proof, Or facts
Just to get a little fame
They went on Jayz Side, cause he got way more money then Dame
Heard a rapper on the radio Name SaVaGe
Not even average, Aint a diss, just like reality flashes
"Just Take It"

Or was it when Aj and Free left Bet
Now that Bet, cannot be within me
Cause the owner, got blind by dollars, now its kinda hard to see
Soulja boy got them doing the dance
Now we can't stand still in are stance
Cause all they rap about is what we tuck up in are pants
Blamed Lupe when he forgot lines on stage
Now Lupe is the artist we praise
See how a phase, got everyone on a different page
Just cause a simple change, was arranged

Now a days all they do is cock ride
Now all I here is No homo, on both sides
Maybe it was cause Wayne kiss Baby
Worst part about it, Waynes not his biological baby
Everyone shouting there the best rapper alive
And the only reason they saying it, cause those rappers have died
They don't freestyle now a days all they do is write it down
So they should name it a written style, instead of it opposite noun

Lickin of lolipops, getting niggas paid?
Now a days rappers pay chicks just to get laid
Everyday is Halloween, so why ask who under the mask
Cause nonsense bars get put First, while sense get put Last
Jin really didn’t get as much props as he needs
Only way he dope is when he blazed on weed
Im only fifteen and im able to notice
Cause when your distracted, its hard to stay focuses
Now a days im afraid to push play, so it stay on pause
Only listen to my shit, cause I learn from my flaws

They know how to critize, but not how to take the blame
Now everybody tryna blow up, on someone elses name
Some of yall may feel me, or talk shit
Shout they get pussy, but really all dick
Pussy Money and Weed, is the modo they follow
They get a boo from me, like i was the appollo
These niggas talkin shit, cause they feel there Higher
In my opnion Hip Hop took a brake and retired

Why ask, why its dieing knowing the reason?
Who killed it, its probably you who's readin
No one to ask you to feel me
But Feel my writes
So when they ask who killed it
Say it's all of us ight?

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Date Submitted: Sep 22, 2008 (12:19 AM)
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  Princess Of Po...
11/08/08 (03:36 PM) 
This is very true.I love it.10strz and fav

  unique1luv
10/12/08 (12:36 PM) 
"Everyone shouting they're the best rapper alive And the only reason they saying it it 'cause those rappers have died...." damn.Mad respect to you for writing this.No doubt dope as hell and u came hard wit it but on some intellectual, fact tip ya digg,Keep doin u

  D.O.X.
09/22/08 (09:21 AM) 
joe buddens killed this track.....i can definitely see why it lead u to write this

  drybaggij
09/22/08 (08:50 AM) 
YOU DID YOUR THING HOMIE, THIS IS ILL! THAT TRACK IS BANANAS... COOL BEANS.

  TRU-IN-DEED
09/22/08 (03:48 AM) 
i co-sign everything roxie said the jay thing you being underrated and all that its true. I been saying for the longest that people need to keep an eye out for you bruh. You killin 'em right now and its only a matter of time before they all see it. - TID

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