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"winning Formula"
  by Chocolatezeus


Arsenic taste
Acidic feeling

negative thinking
Assaults
Picking up speed

Great things looming
New obstacles
Just to
Deter me

Puored concrete
Attempts to
Cement my thinking

Haters leap up
The devil
Wants them to succeed

It will never work
It didn't work for me
Spilling deceit

I look and listen
See them for what they be

The enemy

Here to destroy me
Hold me down
Keep me festering

Hating that
I have made movement
Reached for the stars
Moving forward

They increase their attempts
To hinder
Stop
Drag me deeper

I am not having it
My life is better
Continuing forward to
What was meant for me

I have seen
Tasted my victory

Up ahead is
More of my blessings
I am getting them
Keeping them close

Realizing that
The oppression has increased
Because I am winning

From the chocolatezeus collection (c)
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Date Submitted: Sep 24, 2008 (07:31 AM)
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  Fifikins
10/08/08 (02:10 PM) 
Cool. I like this...Its nicely done. 10! = D

  Ordained Misfi...
09/25/08 (12:24 PM) 
Haters make you greater... no worries... continue on your journey to "true" prosperity... don't look back

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