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"Withdrawals"
  by Snugasaglove (The Rebirth)




I set off on a quest for inspiration
Seeking brief relief thru rhymed revelation
But, for me, sometimes it seems like a drug,
Like sniffing lines of razored coke
As I inhale deeply,
Taking a "charge"
On a lyrical toke
That will, perhaps, clear my mind
From this daily grind
But how can I "let it flow"
When my brain can't let go
Of each cornered cobweb
And my ink runs at low ebb
With no flood in sight
Trying to get the write right
But it with all my mental might
I can't find a suitable verb to curb
This "monkey on my back!"
When balled paper wads stack
And my vocabulary is still slack
While like a raving junkie
I wail and pace the floor
But just like the poetic fool I am
I still go back for more

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Date Submitted: Apr 04, 2009 (09:12 PM)
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  Naturally_Soul...
07/05/09 (10:56 AM) 
i can completely relate! this is one of my new favorites, WONDERFUL WRITE!

  SHOWSTOPPA
06/04/09 (11:02 PM) 
wow...whew...ummm..get out my head lol 10 stars as always..hey sis..its been awhile...my emotions are so intense right now...had to come read your lastest you no i will throw my last pen at you so write on snug!!!

  jerl
05/29/09 (02:38 PM) 
Lawd, you really nailed it. This is just how I feel. I am a junkie right now and my ebb is low. I am trying to write but there doesn't seem to ba a word flow, and now you know. Yet here I am again ....reaching. Thank you so much, I know now that I am not alone. Thank you for this write!

  BSavvy
05/28/09 (03:45 PM) 
So relatable sometimes you can't seem to get the words right or fully express what you feel inside but you can't help to still write but even in that state the write still comes out right bc it's still what you feel inside..... Definitely feeling this one Snug......

  ButterflyDream
04/26/09 (05:22 PM) 
lol,this was a write that I think we all as poets can relate to.And u captured the feelings so well,not to mention that last line sumed things up perfectly....cause we all cant help but to go back for more!This was a great write,I enjoyed:)

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