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"Without You"
  by Brokenvegtable
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Too Far Gone by ♥MisSexy♥


Without
One
Moment
I
Cant
Wait
Any
Longer
For
It
To
Be
Anything
I
Want
It
To
Be
.
.
.
WITHOUT
YOU
.
.
.
.
I
Sing
Myself
To
Sleep
At
Night
The
Dark
Envelops
Me
Making
My
Mind
Develop
Dreams
That
Are
Not
Happy
Because
I
Know
I
Am
.
.
.
.
WITHOUT
YOU
.
.
.
.
The
Days
Seem
To
Trickle
By
Lingering
On
The
Moments
When
I
Know
I
Am
Alone
As
If
To
Stick
It
To
Me
That
I
Can
Not
Live
.
.
.
.
.
WITHOUT
YOU
.
.
.
.
.
There
Is
Not
A
Minute
That
Passes
By
That
I
Do
Not
Cry
From
Knowing
That
You
Are
Not
Beside
Me

HOLDING
ME

WARMING
ME

TOUCHING
ME

KISSING
ME

WANTING
ME

And
I
Live
For
The
Time
Being
In
A
State
Of
Denial
Because
I
Have
To
Compensate
For
The
Lack
Of
Being
.
.
.
.
.
.
.WITHOUT
YOU
.
.
.
.
.
My
Life
Would
Mean
Nothing
If
I
Could
Not
Have
You
Next
To
Me
At
All
My
Purpose
Would
Be
Worthless
If
I
Was
To
Be
.
.
.
.
.
WITHOUT
YOU
.
.
.
.
.
Please
Do
Not
Make
Me
Beg
On
My
Hands
And
Knees
For
The
Companionship
I
Need

PLEASE

PLEASE

PLEASE

Will
You
Forgive
Me

I
NEED
YOU

I
WANT
YOU

I
LOVE
YOU

And
I
Just
Can
Not
See
Living
My
Life
If
It
Means
I
Live
It
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
WITHOUT
YOU



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Date Submitted: Oct 31, 2009 (12:21 PM)
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  blakkrose
11/04/09 (11:06 PM) 
I'm in aqreement with Breezy on the eerie feelinq in this piece, very empathetic to any who reads it. bu tlike I always say, benq alone canbe a blessinq, not a curse or fore warninq of life to be. Love ya self and love beinq alone with yoursel above all else if anyone because that's all you really have in the end.

  Sunkissed25
10/31/09 (01:34 PM) 
wow..yea you captured the feeling of painfully missing someone you need. I can feel how immobolizing this emotion can be.

  Indispensable&...
10/31/09 (01:21 PM) 
pleasantly put dear poet...Without You is a great response to my Too Far Gone... Because with out that one true love <<<<<< All those things are hard to pass...Great scribe!!!! MisSexy

  BrEeZyWrOtE
10/31/09 (01:05 PM) 
This made me feel so incredibly alone. The emotion in this piece is just overwhelming. Such unhappiness and yearning...I don't know what else to say. After reading this I'm just in need of a hug

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