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"~Woman In The Mirror~"
  by shaybaby69











Maxwell - This Womans Work - Maxwell
...she is a picture of beauty
flaws, and scares reside all over her
....yet she embraces them proudly
these marks are her lifeline
every scar represents every man...
...that put his hands on her
trying to smother her spirits....
...kill her dreams
and take her soul....
...but the scars on her knuckles
see they show her willingness to fight back...
...not wanting to be a statistic but be a survivor
looking ahead never turning back.....
...for she is ready and able to reach her full potential
this woman i see before me is slowing healing....
....and with each tear that falls
a smile begins to uncover itself....
...its a new day and she can no longer
allow her past to dictate her future...
...no longer can she be a victim of circumstance
she must strive in a dwindling economy....
...not just for herself but also her baby girl
a challenge she accepts with open arms...
....for if she never struggled
she would not truly understand the ways of the world...
...so as i stare in the mirror at this woman
i say my final goodbyes, my past will be my downfall no more...
....with one throw the glass shatters
letting my...
....insecurities
hang ups....
aggressions....
..and pain
hit the ground as i move on...
.....pushing to be the best me
i can possibly be.......
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Date Submitted: Mar 10, 2009 (02:04 PM)
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  big josh
04/02/09 (02:33 PM) 
great job shorty, im lovin da poems :)

  nieceyspeaks
03/31/09 (05:31 PM) 
wonderful *clapping*... this piece was very beautiful.. i admire your strength.. thanks for sharing..=-)

  T.R.I.G.G.U.S.
03/11/09 (03:14 PM) 
this was just wow girl. the passion for breaking through toils to reach goals was so powerful. it just picked up energy and intensity as each line was read. the scars be they actual or metaphoric sybolized such adversty met and pushed past. "....and with each tear that falls a smile begins to uncover itself.... " when you feel that true power you have inside, its like each tear is the past dripping away making it easier to focus. drop a tear, pick up energy, drop a tear, pick up energy. "....f...
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  Syndel
03/10/09 (08:04 PM) 
first let me say it is wonderful to feel the ink flow from your pen then let me say this write was smooooooth just what was needed was said excellent

  touchdapearl2
03/10/09 (03:53 PM) 
This was one of them writes where it really touches you! and you can feel the pain and strength in this write!

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