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"WOMAN"
  by Remy82


What is a Woman?
Someone in the kitchen hummin
Your ego, that’s what she be strummin
That one that got your heart pumpin

And once you’ve fell she got your mind gone
Got you singing those slow songs
Got you feeling, feelings that are oh so strong

And why? Is it because of the different things she possess’s?
All her secrets, to you she confesses
Or the fly way that she dresses
Her magnificence just messes……

With your mind, and if she ever left you would BEG for her to come back
And your manhood she never attacks
She recognizes that she is your compliment and not the head, this is a fact
She keeps you focused and if you do fall off she’s able to put you back on track

Her conversation is something that your mind completely craves
To face this thing called love, she has made you brave
That walk she got! Man, around town it’s all the rave

So to realize that you’re heart is the only one she has in her possession
Makes you almost want to have some sort of obsession
You at times stare at her at night while she sleeps, is your confession

In the morning you are awaken with a good home cooked meal
Just a taste of her love makes you speechless, uncertain of how exactly you feel

She has trusted you and has given you her hand
Recognizes that you need that respect and that you’re the man
And when you mess up and genuinely apologizes she forgives and genuinely understands

At one time you struggled to deal with pain and strife
This woman right here though, she has been able to show you the light
All her love FOR YOU she keeps locked in real tight
Whatever battle you stand against she is game to fight
All the more reason why you’ve made her your wife.
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Date Submitted: Jun 17, 2009 (05:25 PM)
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Date: 07/08/09 (06:47 PM)
Author: Preechman
Poem Title: "MAN"

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comment icon  COMMENTS (27)
  lady
10/26/09 (03:34 PM) 
oh yes, this is going in my fav\'s. a real women is exactly this and more. beautiful write:)

  leotian
09/29/09 (02:16 PM) 
Very well expressed. Nice flow.

  me-me
09/17/09 (04:16 PM) 
this is def. a bangen piece. you blazed it ma keep pushen dat pen

  lazyme35
09/15/09 (11:04 AM) 
indeed thats a real woman..that was beautiful I loved it. very powerful and strong write..10*s

  Luscious_atrup...
09/13/09 (09:52 AM) 
Aww! love how you take us through life to reach the end result of being a wife. i like this alot. Bravo!

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