very poetic flow. Short but but wit a pretty powerful message of inspiration. keep doin u.

I needed to hear this. This poem is very positive. Ten starz and keep them comin

You speaking, nothing but the truth, life is indeed a twist, These were true and deep words, keep doin it

I would've enjoyed this poem as an inspirational piece if you had brought more of yourself to the table. It seems like you used a lot of recycled lines from gospel songs and sermons, and not a lot of your own words to this poem. It's still inspirational, just not very original to me. Keep writing...

we all know they won't last but when the trials & tribulations come...don't it seem like they take forever to pass! thanks for the inspiration Poet.