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"worthless..."
  by trinabeana


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sometimes frustrations will take its toll

flushed with running sobs making me feel not as whole

compelling myself to banishment which is a non-favorable mode

tempting me into making bad decisions which can remotely run my mind from sane to fake gold

worthless...

baking my heated brain got my nerves riding on an endless go

raining prey to my weakness like putting mushrooms to a helpless soul

high on not life but my own consience centerfold

which is worthless...

counting days til I can break this weak load

frustated with light when night hasn't broken this colored code

a cycle that only spins because karma won't let me come out of this coded commode

so worthless is a mind that don't know which way to go
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Date Submitted: Jul 20, 2008 (05:22 PM)
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  Darkfon
03/11/09 (08:35 AM) 
dam dam lol, nice one

  acey
11/21/08 (02:01 AM) 
girl this was hot and very relating as well....10stz

  touchdapearl2
07/21/08 (11:45 PM) 
there is so much emotion expressed in this piece.........there is so much confusion spoken in this piece......but thats just you hot write babe!

  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/21/08 (02:59 AM) 
hhmmmm im feelin ya conceots and ya brought raw emotion to this write im diggin it

  Big B00
07/21/08 (02:39 AM) 
I figgadeal you on this splendid expession of the frustration felt when nothing is going right forcing you to make rash decision that are only known to be fuck ups in hind sight. "baking my heated brain got my nerves riding on anendless go" i feel that shit right there. def fav. One love

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