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"Writing you Off /with video (Spoken)"
  by *~§Poetic§~*


This is another one of those....

I'm so tired of it
Feeling foolish when i swear i'm too smart for mens constant bullshit
But still and all I put up with it
and just swore things would be different in 09'

I wasn't worried bout they ass i was getting mine
I guess i thought if i wait God would send me the right guy in time....
Well i'm waiting.... and still i see no signs

I'm cursed cause i continuely get stuck with guys that only want to love on a part of me
Like wtf i'm not you're XBOX360
I'm not here for you to just pick me up when you feel you have nothing else better to do
I'm not here to entertain you...

And that's some selfish shit you niggas do
Only bother to pick up the phone when it benefits you.
But any other time you don't know my number do you!

And when you see me in public it hey
But when its just me and you its what up boo

And i shoulda knew not to expect more decency out of you
You.... a mere boy
and i guess the puzzle finally comes together
You're just a boy.... and we all know what is a boy with out his toys
So i guess there goes me.... the toy

Well here's the conclusion i'm done with boys and the illusions
they give as men......

I'm writing yall ass's off
So when you txt and get a response 3 hr's later
When you call just to recieve my voicemail...
and when you peep me staring @ you
read my eye's cause their screaming fuck! you Go to hell!

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Date Submitted: Feb 15, 2009 (03:13 PM)
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  big josh
11/18/09 (09:30 AM) 
this was most definitely a wonderufl pieec and the video was kind of plus for me. you presented yourself very well. great job :)

  LiL LeeLee
03/16/09 (04:07 AM) 
dis right here need to be in a book or some dis right here is hot as hell...i think about er girl go through this...but just know all of them is not like that but know its a small percent of them!!! lol but i love this

  lala763
03/16/09 (01:51 AM) 
damn little mama you killed it. i loved this poem cause you said what you had to say and put in the emotions with it man over all this is a nice piece.

  MR. BYRD
02/25/09 (11:11 PM) 
DAmn Damn Damn.... this was a truly deep deep deep poem and very strong and I'm glad you're back on the scene in 09.....continue to strive for the best and stay strong...you will definitely see those signs.....I hope all is well....

  Ordained2Chang...
02/25/09 (03:05 PM) 
Well sometimes it takes you going through the garbage to realize you're with can't be measured

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