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"x-rated"
  by Ladymae


walked in the room
skin glistenin from da shower
I try to ignore it
but its been
23 days 13 hours
since i felt that thick lucious umph
all inside of me

mind placed in the nastiest places
my heart and ma pulse started to break me
my thighs get hot
my v gets wet

Its his tongue i miss the most
on my back, neck, ears
teeth marks everywhere
from his thrust to his touch
Orgasms all ova

Shivers and moans takin ova
back goes out
but i been in a long drought
so do it to i'm in a comma
then wake me up by doin it all ova
again
again
and again

suck lick flick feel scream moan groan grip scratch pull push
These actions are taken as he eats ma puss
tears and sweat mixed up
as the pleasure is preponderant
as we spend this time sweetly spent

I realize that
this was my dream
cause we still in the midst of an argument
but that angry face just gets me wet
so keep yellin and grab ma neck

I have stop cause its too x-rated to write the rest
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Date Submitted: Oct 18, 2008 (11:05 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (3)
Date: 01/21/09 (04:06 AM)
Author: Metaphor de Baldvini
Poem Title: xxx

Date: 12/01/08 (11:49 PM)
Author: TARRIE
Poem Title: When You're Mad

Date: 10/24/08 (09:05 AM)
Author: muisq
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comment icon  COMMENTS (25)
  AR-15
01/03/09 (01:55 AM) 
you freaky individual you..lol.. but poetry can be x rated you know.. so next time.. continue ..lol.. Nice work Tweety

  KGgg
01/01/09 (03:21 AM) 
sis u did tha thang on this piece..u really did and im feeling it fully..lol..i love the way it ended to...ten from me

  Ms. Smith
12/21/08 (01:19 PM) 
"back goes out...but i've been in a long drought" lmao...girl...u did it with this one...I was feelin' it the whole way through...i love how u ended it...good write. 10 starz

  J.Hard
12/20/08 (12:16 AM) 
yo, u laid it out, i like...and the title fits, lol...good ish

  TARRIE
12/01/08 (11:17 PM) 
i need a cigarette after reading this one...omg, i damn near lost my mind at "thick luscious umph"...lmao...i wish i cud give u 30 stars for this one boo! Great job!

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