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"YELLING IN THE RAIN"
  by TWANGINU


I JUST CANT STOP CRYING
THE PAIN INSIDE HURTS AND IM DYING
THE RAIN IS COMING DOWN LIKE MY TEARS
AND IM ALONE LEFT TO CRY
IM WALKING IN THE MIDDLE OF I-95
JUST WAITING FOR THAT ONE PERSON TO TAKE ME OUT
BUT ALL THE CARS SEEM TO CARE
AND IM YELLING ...PLEASE HIT ME...END THIS PAIN
I NEVER SEEN A MAN CRY LIKE ME
AND AT THIS POINT I DONT CARE
I LAY IN THE RAOD WHILE ALL THE CARS GO BY
AND I JUST STOP CRYING
I DONT KNOW WHY...I JUST DO
AND FOR THE FIRST TIME IN MY LIFE
I SAW A RAINBOW
I SMILE AND THE RAIN STOP
WONDERING WHY THE WORLD HURT...WHEN I HURT
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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2008 (09:46 PM)
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  Epimetheus
11/20/09 (02:43 PM) 
oh and by the way what was the point in writing in all caps it didn't add to the emotion by the way

  Epimetheus
11/20/09 (02:42 PM) 
Damn I couldn't even get through that childish dribble. Do you even thick before you click those keys? Be a little creative would you?

  Lyrical Goddes...
11/18/09 (08:15 PM) 
This was a very moving... I feel this way at times, I absolutely loved this piece of work.

  DonPoetiq
11/15/09 (03:17 PM) 
Hey there Brother. God Bless you, and yours. I could actually feel your pain(perceived, or actual) as I read down this piece...Great job. Thanking you for the love, and time you took in reading my poetry. It means everything to this man...Be Well, and Be Faithful/Peace

  timesticking
09/25/09 (11:54 AM) 
heartbreak and pain are motherfuckers they will have you doing crazy things...like walking down i-95 crying in the rain

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