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"Yellow"
by Jody
She came when it was her turn to leave
When the leafs where changing colors
She stood tall, showing off her yellow
Maybe she just wanted to see snow
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Oct 03, 2008 (09:36 PM)
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COMMENTS (8)
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10/12/08 (08:46 PM)
this is snow someone pissed on?...*thinkin...or leaves falling before the snow?...me thinks pissy snow
MAVRICK
10/07/08 (07:25 PM)
Autumn is a beautiful spirit...she loves showing off all her colors...and just like the diva she is...she LEAVES gracefully...great write.
danceluv
10/07/08 (02:54 PM)
really nice visual i got here.. keep em coming
iva
10/04/08 (04:50 PM)
really nice jody
Jody
10/04/08 (04:29 PM)
lmao, no, B, it's not "used snow" but that might make for a good haiku lol, it's about a late bloom basically...
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