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""YES""
  by prettysugar10


After the disagreements, we discussed our future
and what would become.
After we came to the agreement of never leaving & growing old
Together……….

Lovemaking began with the touching of two tongues …

My man had his strong hands on my hips
My nips against his chest
With all the headache my spoiled ass gave him
Tonight I will try to prove to him that
His love is not a test….

You know sometime when you makeup
There is still a raw emotion left that needs to be
Pulled out. It’s the feeling of
“Don’t ever do me like this again”

I felt every hard thrust
It wasn’t lust
Just our understanding
Of what will be and can’t be anymore
My moans bounced against the walls and he
Continued to climb deeper until
He couldn’t travel anymore
It took my breath away...
I must say….
I’m pulsating
Baby’s throbbing against the core
He looks at me
with
Passion and pain
Lips trembling

He Says… “ I can’t leave your spot or face”
“Is it alright if I stay in “you” tonight?”

"YES"


Turn your lights down low (album version) - Bob Marley ft Lauren Hill
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Date Submitted: Jan 03, 2008 (01:36 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 04/22/09 (02:40 AM)
Author: ~Prettysugar10~
Poem Title: "YES" PT.2

Date: 01/03/08 (03:34 AM)
Author: Group: The Spitters
Poem Title: Make Up Pussy

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  HoneyBronze
01/07/08 (10:53 PM) 
This write is exactly what I needed right now to get me through my situation. Nicely done. Truly enjoyed.

  ghettopoetic15
01/05/08 (06:43 PM) 
yesssssssssssssssss damn dat was a hot write ma wordplay was real decent ma 10 starz

  D.O.X.
01/05/08 (11:57 AM) 
wow...i had no idea where u was going wit this...the endin was tastefully donw

  Doughboy
01/04/08 (10:07 AM) 
DAMN......... you this one is got damn PS... you really taking the fucking game by storm!!!!!!! You laid this shit straight down!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!

  SIDEWALKILLA
01/03/08 (10:44 AM) 
sensual to say the most!!!!

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