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"Yes we can"
  by Datsexichick
  - This Poem is a response to the poem let's be by the kid m-billa


First off before i answer ur question there's somethings u have to understand..
I been hurt by way to many "men".
So if u can convince me that your better then the ones in mah past
then Yes we can be more then just friends.

See i need a man who whispers sweet nothings in mah ear
Someone who means and truly will be there.
i want to cuddle and talk after makin love.
I want us to be able to sit and talk while chillin in the tub.

The pain they caused it built that wall around mah heart.
I promised never to engage in another relationship from that day forward.
But u came along and presented a proposal that was hard to resist.
I just wont wear mah heart on mah sleeve any more.
its to must of a risk.
So if u think u better then the past.
Yes we can be more then friends.

U proved to be the knight in mah the shining armor.
Im givn the proposal a chance.
Just please dont make me regret it..
I just dont think i can stomach another heart ache.
i wont be able to take it.
So yes u proved to be better then the past
i would love to be more then just friends...
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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2008 (09:56 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  big josh
01/08/09 (06:57 PM) 
true shit shorty, 10s ma much luv

  koolaid
12/06/08 (12:33 PM) 
i loed this ma excellant response and i feel you all way

  hiswife0926
11/28/08 (02:31 PM) 
sooo true...well expressed.. nice write.

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