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"You Asked For It"
  by Pete Alma
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Missing You (Pete Alma) by virtuouspatty


Open wide
I promise to stay in-between
Ever-so gently moving
through the rough moments
and vehemently beating the softer spots
making you too wet causing you to frown and crinkle
so I'll blow coolly to make sure you’re dry
I like the blue and white on you
and you said you desire something hard and black inside
enjoy the ride
because daddy can write in this notebook all night.
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Date Submitted: Apr 15, 2009 (04:28 PM)
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  Snugasaglove (...
04/17/09 (02:23 PM) 
LMBO! Pete, YOU are da MAN and you know it! ---But you are such a tease!

  virtuouspatty
04/15/09 (11:06 PM) 
alright petealma, nice response you know i love it

  Knowthyself
04/15/09 (05:13 PM) 
ok. this is Pete Alma!!!lol. Nice response.

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