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"You Can't Serve Two Masters"
  by Tha Scorpion AKA "Mr. Make 'Em Cum"


If we can't be lover's, then we can't be friends
Too much pain from the past for us to make amends

The devil came and clouded our view, we lived in pretend
Though we knew no good could ever come from committing sins

We both knew what was done in the dark would come to the light
Still we knowingly did wrong and continued to sleep and creep in the night

Fulfilling our carnal desires without thought, living so absurd
Both had the Lord in our lives too, but we just ignored HIS holy word

We let the pleasures we got from our flesh supercede our ways
Continued to please ourselves sexually living both our lives in a daze

Then when the shit hit the fan we couldn't lie we had no one to blame
All we could do was face our demons and stand broken down and ashamed

Still, God never forsaken you nor I and though I'm still a work in progress
I pray everyday He takes these sinful ways from me and help me thru my mess

I hope He is still working in you for we both lived thru an awful disaster
But it made me truly realize no matter what, man can not serve two masters

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Date Submitted: Sep 20, 2008 (05:03 PM)
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09/23/08 (12:00 PM) 
I feel you...i been through this....it's like...how the fuck we gon be friends?...like...we already broke the most important promises to each other when we was together.....nawl...fuck it...no ill will but...we gotta move on

  K.G. that deal
09/22/08 (12:49 PM) 
The ending really touched me!

  Dana Dane
09/22/08 (09:43 AM) 
I really, really luv this! True indeed, you perfectly captured the internal struggle. Felt your heart in this piece for sure.

  mindigoblue
09/21/08 (02:27 PM) 
Nothing more to be said about this sweets. You spoke plain truths here and with conscientious action and perseverance people get themselves back on track and are able to remove those external/internal influences that create opportunities and leave room for poor choices. Never an easy road since pleasure is addictive in a very insidious way that is not overtly obvious but working at does help to make it easier to combat.

  "Word$mith"
09/20/08 (06:44 PM) 
Scorp U hit the nail. o the head with this one..FAV all Day..Killa write man..killa

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