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"You Changed My Life"
  by 22dcentpoet


You came to me without warning and forever changed my life
You even asked me on several occassions to be your wife
Your warm hands of steel held me when I cried and was at deaths door
You looked at me lovingly and said "Baby you will never have to cry anymore"
When I felt the weight of the world on my shoulders and my lifeline being used up
You caressed and held me and let me sip from life's precious cup
You changed me from a cold hearted fool chasing rainbows and a pot of gold
You gave me your love and your tender manly hands to hold
You stood with me when I could not stand alone
You took me from a little girl to a woman all grown
This is why every night I look up and thank God above
Cause you changed me into a human being worthy of your love
Smooth Jazz - Roy Ayers


for Mo with LOVE
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Date Submitted: Mar 02, 2009 (12:45 PM)
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  Tragic
06/22/09 (01:00 AM) 
awww damn the last line is a killer sooooo sweet

  dontnohow
05/24/09 (05:02 PM) 
lol, sweetness..10stars

  datboyjada
03/22/09 (02:18 PM) 
this was very nice. i can feel u putting ur all in dis. god bless u sweetheart. wonderful masterpiece. 10strz

  H!sLovaH!sFr!3...
03/02/09 (01:54 PM) 
This is so sweet and passionate. i don't know who the man is but you are a very lucky woman.

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