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"'' You '' Deticated To My Dad"
  by cocoaprincezz


Not seeing you but knowing that you're there makes me feel sick to the point where I feel left out, and abandoned and the least of your problems. Is it emotional rides or the ocean turning tides that makes me abide by my feelings? I don't know, but I do know that I never want to see you again. You have made me feel like I am trapped in so many ways, yet free in others. But my decision stands firm on the ground made of rock for my opinions are not shaking in the sand. Now if you feel left out, abandoned, or unimportant, you now feel what you've made me feel before. And thanks to my decision, I will never feel that way again knowing that sticks and stones may break my bones but words cannot break anything.
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Date Submitted: Oct 14, 2007 (03:04 PM)
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  Pip
05/10/08 (10:39 PM) 
this is a very powerful scripe that i can deff relate to. you described your feelings so creatively keep that pen movin and always keep your head up!

  Zontise
12/10/07 (08:06 PM) 
i see where your coming from because you are me. 10 stars.

  sexy.beautiful...
11/10/07 (12:42 PM) 
this is emotional and i feel you when u said not seeing you but knowing that you're there makes me feel sick to the point where i feel left out.....i met mine at 16 and now that i'm older i wish i met him when i was younger of needing him but now i don't....even tho it's me but that's how i feel

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